Question

1．請(qǐng)以"One Thing I'm Proud of"為題，用英語寫一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一件你自己認(rèn)為得意的事情．要求如下：
（1）．記述事情經(jīng)過；
（2）．簡要說明你感到得意原因或從中得到的啟示．
注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）
One Thing I'm Proud of
I still remember how I became a good tabletennis player．
The first day I went to high school，I sawsome of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed how skillful they were，Iwas determined to be just as good．Later on，I watched them carefully to learntheir techniques．Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough tochallenge the good players．At the end of the term I became one of the bestplayers in my class．
I am really proud of this experience，because it helps merealize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals throughhard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makesperfect．"．

Answer 1

分析 本文考查記敘文的寫作，記一件令自己驕傲的事，記敘+議論型作文，命題開放性作寫作要點(diǎn)（1）記述事情經(jīng)過；（2）簡要說明你感到得意原因或從中得到的啟示．又屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱以第一人稱為主．重要短語：be determined to （下定決心做…），later on（后來），keep doing （一直做某事），be proud of（對(duì)…感到自豪），fulfill our potential（實(shí)現(xiàn)我們的潛能），achieve our goals（實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)）．

解答 I still remember how I became a good tabletennis player．（開頭）
The first day I went to high school，I sawsome of my classmates playing table tennis．Amazed how skillful they were，Iwas determined to be just as good．Later on，I watched them carefully to learntheir techniques．【高分句型】Then I kept practicing until I becameconfident enough to challenge the good players．At the end of the term I becameone of the best players in my class．（事情經(jīng)過）
I am really proud of this experience，because it helps merealize that we all can fulfill our potential and achieve our goals throughhard work．It also helps me better understand the proverb"Practice makesperfect．"【高分句型】（啟示）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．