Question

8．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Kobe Bryant，37，played the final game of his 20-year career in April 14，2016．He ends up with five championships，18All-Star game appearances．He showed a amazing 60points in the 101-96Lakers victory over the Utah Jazz，which was unbelievable．The crazily crowd had great expectations of the final score，cheering and shouted every time Bryant scored during his 42minute．
After the game，he was been given a microphone．So he said he couldn't believe how fast 20years had gone by．He thought the most important part was the whole team stayed together all the time through the ups and downs．Bryant's successful professional career happens not for coincidence but thanks to all the sweating days．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要對Kobe Bryant進行介紹，包括其取得的成就．

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ogether all the time through the ups and downs．Bryant's successful professional career happens not for coincidence but thanks to all the sweating days．
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1．in改為on，考查介詞，在具體某一天使用介詞on．
2．ends改為ended，考查時態(tài)，短文描述的是過去發(fā)生的事情，因此使用一般過去時．
3．a(chǎn)改為an，考查冠詞，amazing是以元音音素開頭的單詞，因此使用冠詞an．
4．crazily改為crazy，考查形容詞，此處應使用形容詞修飾后面的名詞crowd．
5．shouted改為shouting，考查非謂語，shout與其邏輯主語crowd構(gòu)成主動的關(guān)系，因此使用現(xiàn)在分詞形式．
6．minute改為minutes，考查名詞，此處應使用名詞復數(shù)minutes．
7．been去掉，考查語態(tài)，此處使用被動語態(tài)be done的形式，been出現(xiàn)了重復．
8．So改為And，考查連詞，此處是并別的關(guān)系，沒有因果關(guān)系，因此使用and．
9．was后加that，考查表語從句，表語從句的that一般不省略，因此在was后加that．
10．for改為by，考查固定搭配，by coincidence"巧合"．

點評 短文改錯要具備兩個基礎(chǔ)，一是懂得分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，二是知道充當各個句子成分的詞類或詞性．并且注意人稱代詞，從句的引導詞，名詞單復數(shù)，和全文時態(tài)的理解，對于一些固定搭配，平時的學習中要多注意積累．