Question

7．假如你是李華，最近你在瀏覽一個澳大利亞中學網站時，看到一位名叫Jack的中學生的留言，他計劃在暑假期間到中國桂林旅游，希望能有一名中國高中生做他的導游．你對此很感興趣，請根據以下要點提示寫一封e-mail給他，介紹相關情況．
    主要內容包括：
    1希望義務做他的導游；
    2．簡略介紹桂林；
    3．打算如何給他做導游；
    4．期盼他的回復．
    注意：
    1詞數100左右；
    2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
    3．信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數．
Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，…
                                                                               
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封電子郵件．寫作時，首先要寫清要點，包括：表達意愿，自我介紹，具體做法，期待回復．其次，要以第一人稱來表述．最后要注意時態(tài)以一般現在時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài)為主．
重點短語和句型：
intend to do sth 打算做某事
scenic spots 景點
stunning beauty 美景
look forward to 期盼
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．
句中while連接時間狀語從句，從句中省略了相同的主語和系動詞．
I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．
句中現在分詞enjoying作伴隨狀語．
I feel it a great honor to be your guide．
句中it作形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的動詞不定式．

解答 Dear Jack，
Recently，while browsing a senior high school website of Australia，I saw the message you posted on it．（高分句型一）I am pleased to know that you intend to travel in Guilin during the summer vacation with a Chinese student as your guide．（表達意愿）
I am a native of Guilin and know the city very well．Therefore，I volunteer to be your tour guide．Guilin is a famous international tourist city．It is well-known for its beautiful scenery．On the one hand，I will keep you company visiting the beautiful scenic spots．I will go to Yangshuo with you by boat，enjoying the stunning beauty on either bank of the Lijiang River．（高分句型二）On the other hand，I will tell you the long and rich history of Guilin．（介紹桂林和自己的打算）
Of course，you will taste a lot of special local food，such as rice noodles．
Look forward to your reply．I feel it a great honor to be your guide．（高分句型三）（期待回復）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．