Question

短文改錯(cuò) （共10處錯(cuò)誤，每改對(duì)1處1分，共10分）

Once there was boy. His mother was very fat but talked too much to him. He didn’t want his teachers and classmate to see her. Every time the parents’ meeting was held, he would ask a beautiful lady to attend it instead her. In return, she paid her 50 yuan each time. One day, he was serious ill and lost consciousness. So he sent to hospital by his teacher. Three days late he came back to life and got to know his mother had been looking after him all the time. He was so thankful that he cried and had told his mother how sorry he was for that he had done.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 boy 前加a

 but改為and;

 classmate改為 classmates

 instead 后加 of

  she 改為 he

 serious 改為 seriously

  sent 前加 was

 late 改為 later

 去掉told 前 had

 for后 that 改為 what

【解析】

試題分析：

 boy 是可數(shù)名詞，前加a，句意：從前有個(gè)男孩

 他媽媽很胖和他說(shuō)話(huà)太多，是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but改為and;

 考查名詞：teachers是復(fù)數(shù)，classmate也應(yīng)該改為 classmates

 instead是副詞，要是接賓語(yǔ) 后加 of

 根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是男孩每次付給他50塊錢(qián)，she 改為 he

 修飾形容詞ill應(yīng)該是副詞seriously

 句意：他被老師送到醫(yī)院，用過(guò)去時(shí)的被動(dòng)：sent 前加 was

 表示“幾天后”用a few days later

 和cried并列用過(guò)去時(shí)told

 for后面的賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中缺少賓語(yǔ)： that 改為 what

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本題考查較為細(xì)致，要求考生要特別耐心答題中注意句子中人稱(chēng)和數(shù)是否一致，時(shí)態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用。一般的這類(lèi)題型不會(huì)出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類(lèi)題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)較多。平時(shí)應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細(xì)讀短文，標(biāo)出出錯(cuò)的位置，改完以后還得細(xì)讀短文，看看改過(guò)后的短文是否語(yǔ)意通順，符合邏輯。