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【題目】書面表達(dá)

假設(shè)你叫李華，你校高二同學(xué)正在開展一場(chǎng)討論，主題是: 高中學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，給英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況。

55%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：

應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；

做早操，打乒乓球、打籃球，但不要時(shí)間過長；

鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，減少疾病；

鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好。

45% 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：

鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間;

鍛煉容易使人疲勞；

鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時(shí)間不能投入學(xué)習(xí)；

鍛煉中途可能會(huì)受傷。

[寫作要求] 1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

2.表達(dá)清晰。

3.詞數(shù)100左右。

4.開頭結(jié)尾已寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：build their body and reduce lot of diseases. 增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，減少疾病;

a waste of time and tiring 浪費(fèi)時(shí)間, 使人疲勞

be hurt 受傷

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise.

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Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

55% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day, such as doing morning exercise, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them. Exercise builds their body and reduces lot of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.

On the other hand, 45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After having sports, they are too excited to study and it’s possible to be hurt in sports.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是給英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點(diǎn)就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時(shí)可以按照提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。4.注意寫信的格式。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文按照提綱要求，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言連貫。同時(shí)使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如非謂語動(dòng)詞After having sports, they are too excited to study and it’s possible to be hurt in sports.常用句型表達(dá)Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.以及短語 on the other hand等。