Question

【題目】近年來大城市交通擁堵嚴重，影響了人們的生活和經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，對此人們十分抱怨。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)以下要點用英語給報社寫封信。

1.交通現(xiàn)狀及影響；

2.提出改進建議；

3.希望建議被采納。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic.

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are always stuck in traffic jams and complaining about the tough situation. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development.

To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some pieces of advice.First of all, more streets and roads should be built and we can speed up the flow of buses and cars in this way. Besides, the number of bikes and cars should be limited, which can undoubtedly smooth the traffic flow. What’s equally significant is that the number of private cars should be put under control. Meanwhile, buses should run on their own special routes which are not supposed to be used by other vehicles. Last but not least, it is a must to develop underground train quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be helpful and well taken.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇書信類作文，要求給報社寫一封信，一，通篇以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。二，要點要齊全。主要要求有：1. 交通現(xiàn)狀及影響；2. 提出改進建議；3. 希望建議被采納，但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。3. 注意語氣。既然是寫建議信，所以要注意用詞準確，易懂。

【范文亮點】：本文用了書信應該用的格式，用了一般現(xiàn)在時，將來時等的時態(tài)穿插。 be stuck in ，complain about,speed up ,等動詞短語，使文章簡練，另外First of all，Besides， Meanwhile， Last but not least，等連接詞使文章條理清楚的，寫出了各種要點，并且自己也寫出了觀點，主語從句的應用，例如What’s equally significant is that the number of private cars should be put under control.給文章增彩。