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16．假如你是某英語報紙 English Corner 欄目的編輯李華，現(xiàn)在有一名叫王明的學(xué)生來信向你請教如何學(xué)好英語．請你就此給他回信，并提出幾條建議．信的內(nèi)容主要包括：
每天早上朗讀英語單詞、句子及短文；盡量多記一些有用的句子并背誦一些短文章．
經(jīng)常進(jìn)行大量的課外閱讀．
每天應(yīng)安排一些時間進(jìn)行聽力練習(xí)．
只要你能充分利用你的業(yè)余時間來學(xué)習(xí)英語，你的英語就會很快得到提高．
注意：1．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章連貫．
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．詞數(shù)：120左右．
Dear Wang Ming，
I'm an editor of English Corner．I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Dear Li Ming，
I am an editor of English Corner，I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions：（高分句型）
First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．（高分句型）
As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（高分句型）
All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua
All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 一、根據(jù)提示，本文包括以下幾個要點：1．每天朗讀單詞、句子及短語，多記句子并背誦短文章．2．經(jīng)常進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀．3．每天安排時間進(jìn)行聽力練習(xí)．4．充分利用業(yè)余時間學(xué)英語，你的英語將很快得到提高．
二、根據(jù)要點，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)木涫桨岩�點擴(kuò)充成正確的句子．在組詞成句時要注意動詞的時態(tài)、名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)、主謂一致、人稱一致、單詞拼寫等．同時，為增加文章句子的多樣性，可適當(dāng)使用一些復(fù)雜句．然后使用學(xué)過的連接詞和寫作技巧使句子連貫成文章．
1．每天朗讀單詞、句子及短語，多記句子并背誦短文章． I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．You should try to memorize useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．
2．經(jīng)常進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀．You should read a great variety of books after school．
3．每天安排時間進(jìn)行聽力練習(xí)．A certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．
4．充分利用業(yè)余時間學(xué)英語．Make good use of your spare time to learn English．Your will make rapid progress．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
    I am an editor of English Corner，I've received your letter asking me to give you some advice on how to learn English well．Here are some of my suggestions：（高分句型）   
     First of all，I suggest you read the English words，sentences and short articles aloud every morning．Meanwhile，you should try to memorize the useful sentences as many as possible and recite some short passages as well．（高分句型）Moreover，it is suggested that you read a great variety of books after school．Last but not least，a certain amount of time should be spent on listening exercises．（高分句型）
    As long as you can make good use of your spare time to learn English，surely，you will make rapid progress．（高分句型）Just as the saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way．"If you stick to your dream and study hard，I'm sure you will be successful in your English study．（高分句型）
    All the best!
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點．設(shè)計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等，把要點串聯(lián)起來，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致