Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是李華。針對我國假期選擇出國旅游的人越來越多，但有的游客有不文明行為的現(xiàn)象，請給21st Century Teens編輯部寫一封信。內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點:

1.出境游熱的原因，如經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的原因、人們對外國文化感興趣的原因等；

2.旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；

3.你的態(tài)度和看法。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右

2.短文開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

參考詞匯：不文明行為：immoral behaviors 樹立形象：uphold an image

Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays.

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Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

At present, more and more people choose to travel abroad when they have holidays. There are some vital reasons. With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad . Besides, more people are becoming interested in foreign cultures, therefore, they are eager to visit them with their own eyes.

However, some people behave very badly in foreign countries. For example, they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.

Personally, since it’s well known that China is an ancient civilized country with a long history , we should always bear / keep it in mind that it is everyone’s responsibility to uphold image of our motherland.

Thank you for your attention.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】試題分析：假如你是李華。針對我國假期選擇出國旅游的人越來越多，但有的游客有不文明行為的現(xiàn)象，請給21st Century Teens編輯部寫一封信。內(nèi)容需要包括以下要點: 1.出境游熱的原因，如經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的原因、人們對外國文化感興趣的原因等；2.旅游中出現(xiàn)了一些不文明現(xiàn)象，如隨地吐痰、亂扔垃圾等；3.你的態(tài)度和看法。這是一篇提綱類作文，需要考生用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。寫作時可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫，同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，應(yīng)注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

【亮點說明】文章簡潔明了，把需要表達的要點清晰的表達了出來，并且做了適當?shù)臄U展，其間也運用了一些連接詞和高級的句型。With the development of people’s living standard and economy, they can afford to go abroad .隨著人們生活水平和經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，人們可以承擔起出國的費用。這一句中的常用句型with the development of 隨著…的發(fā)展，在句中做伴隨狀語。they drop litter everywhere , as well as spit freely in public, which not only shows bad personal qualities , but also does great harm to the image of the country.人們隨地丟垃圾，隨地吐痰，這不僅顯示出個人品質(zhì)低下，還對國家的形象造成了損害。這一句中運用了非限制性定語從句，先行詞是前面提到的兩個動作，但因為是as well as 連接，謂語動詞采用就近原則，所以用的第三人稱單數(shù)；還運用了not only…but also（不僅…還）這個短語，在not only后面的句子需要用部分倒裝形式，即主謂倒裝。it’s well known that眾所周知。另外文章中還有一些短語用得恰到好處，例如：do harm to對…有害；keep in mind牢記等等。