Question

【題目】微笑是世界語言，它可以給人勇氣、信心、安慰…讓人與人之間的相處更加和諧。請你用英語寫一篇關于微笑的短文，次數(shù)100-120.要求如下：

1. 描述一次與微笑有關的經(jīng)歷；

2. 說說你的感受及微笑的意義。

注意：開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Smiling is a universal language, which can give us courage, confidence and comforts.

Answer 1

【答案】

Smiling is a universal language, which can give us courage, confidence and comforts.

I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class. Feeling nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything. I decided to give in, but all my classmates, especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly. Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and finally made it.

I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence, which makes a difference to our life. Moreover, it will improve the relationship between us. It’s smiling that brings harmony to our life. Only when you smile at the world will the world smile back to you. Therefore, keep smiling and show your best to the world.

【解析】

試題分析：微笑是世界語言，它可以給人勇氣、信心、安慰…讓人與人之間的相處更加和諧。請你用英語寫一篇關于微笑的短文，次數(shù)100-120.要求如下：1. 描述一次與微笑有關的經(jīng)歷；2. 說說你的感受及微笑的意義。要用通順的英語句子把所提示的點寫全，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，寫作時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。一定避免全部使用簡單句。注意：開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

【亮點說明】I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class.句中運用了賓語從句和時間狀語從句；Feeling nervous and shy, I forgot almost everything.現(xiàn)在分詞短語在句中做狀語；I decided to give in, but all my classmates, especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly.本句使用了并列句，再加上非謂語動詞和高級副詞的使用，讓文章很上檔次；Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and finally made it.句中巧妙地運用了結果狀語從句；I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence, which makes a difference to our life.賓語從句、動名詞短語作主語、not only--- but also連接兩個并列的謂語動詞和非限制性定語從句神奇般地結合在一個句中；It’s smiling that brings harmony to our life.運用了強調(diào)句式；Only when you smile at the world will the world smile back to you.部分倒裝的使用給文章增添光彩。