Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關(guān)報(bào)道

要求：

根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹，內(nèi)容包括：

1.圖書的基本信息

2.圖書的相關(guān)報(bào)道

3. 100詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Version 1

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.

Version 2

A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.

Version 3

A newly-published book, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, written by an American-Chinese Amy Chua in 2010, has been sold in China from the beginning of 2011. Ms. Amy, who is the professor in Yale University, deals with the stories of her educating her two daughters in the traditional Chinese ways. Her elder daughter has been admitted to both the Yale and Harvard universities. This book caused heated discussion on the differences between the Chinese and American ways in educating Children successfully. The majority of Chinese mothers disapprove of Ms. Amy’s idea.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類短文寫作。介紹一本圖書的相關(guān)信息。提綱類寫作的要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，考生只需要把給出的要點(diǎn)翻譯成英文即可。關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。本文的關(guān)鍵在于選擇合適的句式來表達(dá)所給提綱的內(nèi)容。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

所給的三篇范文均有自己的特色，第一篇泛指中高級(jí)詞匯的運(yùn)用很有特點(diǎn)。第二篇范文中語言和地道，如The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of parenting.中的but surprisingly是很地道的表達(dá)方式。第三篇范文中的非謂語動(dòng)詞運(yùn)用很好，如written by an American-Chinese Amy Chua in 2010。