Question

【題目】最近，你看到某英文報(bào)紙正在征集主題為“如何才能受人歡迎”的短文，對(duì)此你很興趣。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示談?wù)勛约旱南敕ǎ�給該報(bào)社投稿。

要點(diǎn)提示：

1.衣著干凈、整齊，保持微笑。

2. 誠(chéng)實(shí)，樂(lè)于助人。

3.懂得與人合作。

4. 其他。

注意：①詞數(shù)：100詞左右；

②可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

How to be popular

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Answer 1

【答案】 How to be popular

Most people would like to be popular with others, but what is the secret to achieve popularity? In fact, it is very simple.The first step is to improve our appearance. We should always make sure that we are well/neatly dressed and smile warmly. In this way, people will surely be impressed by our confidence. Another step is to build our character. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary. If we know how to work and get on well with others, people will feel comfortable enough to trust us. Besides, to be a good listener is also important. It is a good way to show our respect for others.I am sure we will gain popularity if we can do all of the above.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封建議信。發(fā)表對(duì)“如何才能受人歡迎”的看法。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一、三人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

要點(diǎn)：

1.衣著干凈、整齊，保持微笑。

2. 誠(chéng)實(shí)，樂(lè)于助人。

3.懂得與人合作。

4. 其他。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be popular with；secret；popularity；in fact；appearance；make sure；be well/neatly dressed；in this way；be impressed by；build our character；honest；be willing to；necessary；get on well with；a good listener；respect；gain popularity；the above等

第三步：連詞成句

1. Most people would like to be popular with others.

2. What is the secret to achieve popularity?

3. We should always make sure that we are well/neatly dressed and smile warmly.

4. In this way, people will surely be impressed by our confidence.

5. We should always be honest and willing to help others whenever it is necessary.

6. If we know how to work and get on well with others, people will feel comfortable enough to trust us.

7. It is a good way to show our respect for others.

8. I am sure we will gain popularity if we can do all of the above.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：the first step；another step；

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：besides；

3.表?xiàng)l件關(guān)系：if ；

4.表并列關(guān)系：but等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改