Question

【題目】請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你所崇拜的一位偶像。主要包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 偶像的身份、外貌及性格特征；

2. 你崇拜的理由；

3. 對(duì)你的積極影響。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 提示詞：偶像 idol

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Answer 1

【答案】Of all the people I know, I admire my father most. He is short and plain-looking. His dark skin and strong body are results of hard labor. As a farmer, he is a man with many skills, making him known as “Capable man” in our neighborhood. My father is kind and helpful, so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.

It is my father’s capability and personality that makes him my idol. Because to me, an idol is not someone who looks great and achieves huge success but someone whose example I can follow. My father is always inspiring me to move forward steadily and happily.

【解析】這是一篇人物類話題作文。聯(lián)系題干，以此為中心內(nèi)容進(jìn)行選材�？忌�在寫(xiě)這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.要分析題干，圍繞題干進(jìn)行選材，在寫(xiě)作思路方面，題目要求寫(xiě)偶像，偶像可以是存在于我們身邊的人物，也可以是離我們現(xiàn)實(shí)生活比較遠(yuǎn)的人，不管寫(xiě)哪一類，都要是能對(duì)我們產(chǎn)生積極影響的人。2.要點(diǎn)要齊全，將題目要求的內(nèi)容羅列完整，列明外貌、身份、對(duì)你的影響等，并注意層次結(jié)構(gòu)，注意上下文的銜接。3.注意語(yǔ)態(tài)，描述第三人時(shí)注意動(dòng)詞形態(tài)的使用。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】

1.文章采用了“turn to sb for help 向某人尋求幫助”“As a…作為一個(gè)…”“inspire sb to do sth鼓舞某人做某事”等高頻短語(yǔ)。

2.It is my father’s capability and personality that makes him my idol.強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的使用

3.My father is kind and helpful, so our neighbors often turn to him for help whenever they have trouble.引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。