Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。

People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate (模仿). However, you can set the example by changing yourself to become the person that people want to be like.

注意：①除詩歌外，文體不限； ②內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例；③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；④詞數(shù)不少于120，不得抄寫提示語原句。

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Answer 1

【答案】

Such human nature that people tend to look for an idol in their life, holding the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol, However, we can be others’ idol if we change ourselves and become the person we want to be.

I can’t help recalling the time when I first entered high school, Having failed the entrance exam, I was admitted to an ordinary high school, which disappointed me a lot, I was very bitter and rude, looking down upon everyone at school, Then one day I told myself I couldn’t be like this any longer, Maybe I shouldn’t look for someone to admire but should change myself first, I tried to improve myself a bit and tried to be friendlier to others. As a result, I found myself a lot happier and I was even awarded the title of “Excellent Student” at the end of term.

Life is a constant exercise in self-improvement, Changing yourself to a better self is definitely better than looking for someone better to imitate, Change yourself, and you will make the earth a better world day by day.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文用英文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，注意要結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：tend to趨向于，hold the belief堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為，can’t help doing情不自禁做某事，admit to被錄取，look down upon看不起，As a result結(jié)構(gòu)，the belief that they can become better by following the example of their idol是一句同位語從句，we can be others’ idol if we change ourselves and become the person we want to be是一句條件狀語從句.,which disappointed me a lot是非限制性定語從句，Change yourself, and you will make the earth a better world day by day.是一句祈使句。