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【題目】本周是你校的“文化·藝術(shù)周”，周三你們有幸邀請到了在W大學(xué)任教的外籍老師Hudson教授給高一（8）班的學(xué)生上了一節(jié)英語課。假如你是校報(bào)School Weekly Express的記者，請以An Impressive English Lesson為題按下列提示用英語寫一篇100~120詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1．Hudson 教授上課的情況（語言簡潔、幽默、易懂，幫助及時(shí)有效……）

2．學(xué)生們的表現(xiàn)（積極參與……）

3．學(xué)生們課后感想……

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week, we

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【答案】

An Impressive English Lesson

On Wednesday of this Culture & Art Week we had the honor of inviting Prof．Hudson, a foreign teacher from W University, to give a class to the students of Class Eight, Grade One．His class left the students a deep impression．

Prof．Hudson had a free talk with the students in simple but humorous English．He spoke slowly and clearly so that students could follow him well．Meanwhile, he would repeat just in time what students did not understand．Greatly inspired, most of the students took an active part in his class．

After class, many students interviewed by us sang high praise for Prof．Hudson’s teaching．From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English．

【解析】

試題分析:本文屬于提綱類短文。主要介紹外籍老師Hudson教授給高一（8）班的學(xué)生上了一節(jié)英語課的情況。寫作時(shí)要注意：不要僅僅對要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文行文有序、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、要點(diǎn)全面、拓展合理。對于時(shí)態(tài)以及短語的運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)轿�。特別是高級句式的運(yùn)用十分精彩，如From his lesson, students came to the conclusion that it is not so difficult to learn English well if you talk more in English．中的同位語從句和狀語從句的使用值得借鑒。