Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

Early in the morning I went to the ocean beach to play my guitar. The usually crowded beach was deserted except for two people. On one side of the boardwalk (木板人行道) was a woman who was cleaning the beach with a broom; on the other side was a lone figure sitting and staring to sea. I chose a spot between them and began to play.

As I played, the woman with the broom swept her way right next to me. She stopped sweeping and leaned on her broom, smiling at me. She appeared to be homeless with dirty mismatched clothes.

“You sure play beautiful music.” she said. “I think my friend would like you music. I want to hire you to play for her.” She pointed to the lone figure staring out at the ocean, then produced a few coins from her pocket. “I don’t have much, and I know you’re worth a lot, but if I give this to you, will you play a song for her? She’s going through a lot. I know the music will make her feel better.”

I told her I’d be happy to play for free.

As we walked over to her friend, the Broom Lady told me that her friend had not talked for weeks.We approached, and the Broom Lady introduced me, “Annie, I got you a present to cheer you up. It’s a guitar man who is going to play a song specially for you.”

Annie didn’t move. She was wearing dark sunglasses and had an old coat pulled up to cover most of her face.

I sat next to Annie and played. As I played I put every thought into having good things happen for this woman. I played for quite a while.

Suddenly, Annie turned toward me and said, “You make it so beautiful. I can feel it inside my heart.”

注意:

1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

She took off her sunglasses.

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Paragraph 2:

When I stopped playing and looked up, I was shocked to see a small crowed around us.

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Answer 1

【答案】She took off her sunglasses. I could tell a faint glow pierced the dark clouds of frustration in her eyes. I gestured to her to sit opposite to me and she slowly moved closer. I kept on playing the guitar, trying to reveal my sympathy, understanding and comfort through the soft melodies. It seemed that she couldn’t but recall the bitter and severe days she went through as tears streamed down her cheeks. She didn’t wipe them off but had them falling down, as if all her worries and sorrows went away as well.

When I stopped playing and looked up, I was shocked to see a small crowed around us. They looked at me with enthusiasm, bursting into applause. Annie stood up and clapped her hands too. Several women, having kept an eye on her, approached and hugged her, whispering some cheerful words before they left. Refreshed and relieved, Annie threw her arms around my neck and uttered, “Thank you for your music.”, which assured the Broom Lady of her return to normal speech. I had put on numerous shows to different audiences, but this remained the most healing and rewarding one.

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷：在海邊演奏吉他時(shí)受到“the Broom Lady”的邀請(qǐng)，為她的朋友Annie—一個(gè)遭受不幸的女士—演奏音樂以安撫她的悲傷情緒。

前文主要講的是作者到海邊演奏吉他，遇到了兩個(gè)人—一個(gè)清掃工人the Broom Lady 和一個(gè)遭受不幸的女士。他受到the Broom Lady 的邀請(qǐng)為這位遭受不幸的女士演奏吉他幫助她振奮起來。而他的演奏的確引起了這位女士Annie的共鳴。在給的第一段開頭中，“She took off her sunglasses（她摘下了太陽(yáng)鏡）” “took off her sunglasses為關(guān)鍵詞，后文需要描述作者在演奏時(shí)怎樣用音樂引起了她的共鳴和給與安慰。在給的第二段開頭中“When I stopped playing and looked up, I was shocked to see a small crowed around us.（當(dāng)我停止演奏，抬頭看時(shí)，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)我們周圍有一小群人。）”a small crowed為關(guān)鍵詞，后文要對(duì)這群人對(duì)其音樂的反應(yīng)進(jìn)行描述。同時(shí)還要描述Annie 聽過音樂之后的個(gè)人反應(yīng)。

范文中第一段中描述了作者對(duì)Annie摘下眼鏡后的印象，以及從其悲傷的眼睛里看到的情緒：I could tell a faint glow pierced the dark clouds of frustration in her eyes（我看得出一絲微弱的光芒穿透了她眼中沮喪的烏云），同時(shí)，描述了作者對(duì)其在音樂方面給與的安慰：I kept on playing the guitar, trying to reveal my sympathy, understanding and comfort through the soft melodies.（我繼續(xù)彈著吉他，努力在柔和的旋律中表達(dá)我的同情、理解和安慰。）第二段則描述了Annie聽過音樂之后的感受：Refreshed and relieved, Annie threw her arms around my neck and uttered, “Thank you for your music.”（安妮神清氣爽，如釋重負(fù)，她摟住我的脖子說:“謝謝你的音樂�！保�