【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

When 1 first learn to write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything which I came across into my own language while I was reading. My teacher advised me to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and I showed it to my teacher. It was an interested one which he liked it very much and he read it to the class. All said that the story sounded wonderfully. Their words were a great encouragement to me. What pleasant experience it was!

【答案】1. learn--- learned/ learnt

2. but--- and

3. which--- that

4. advices--- advice

5. talk--- talking

6. with--- in

7. interested--- interesting

8. it去掉

9. wonderfully--- wonderful

10. What pleasant之間加a

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者用英語寫作遇到了很多困難，但在老師的幫助下，他成功的寫出了很棒的故事。

考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：當(dāng)我第一次學(xué)習(xí)用英語寫作時(shí)，我遇到了很多困難。分析文章可知，文章講述的是一件過去發(fā)生的事情，故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。故把learn改為 learned/ learnt。

考查連詞。句意：主要的問題是，我總是用中文思考，并試圖在閱讀時(shí)將遇到的每一件事都翻譯成我自己的語言。分析句意可知，前后兩句應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，表示“我總是用中文思考，并試圖在閱讀時(shí)將遇到的每一件事都翻譯成我自己的語言”。故把but改為and。

考查關(guān)系代詞。句意：主要的問題是，我總是用中文思考，并試圖在閱讀時(shí)將遇到的每一件事都翻譯成我自己的語言。分析句子可知，此處是一個定語從句，先行詞為everything為不定代詞，故應(yīng)用that引導(dǎo)。故把which改為that。

考查不可數(shù)名詞。句意：我聽從了他的建議。advice為不可數(shù)名詞，意為“建議”。故把advices改為advice。

考查動名詞。句意：很快，我開始喜歡自言自語。enjoy dong sth為固定用法，意為“喜歡做某事”。故把talk改為talking。

考查介詞。句意：因?yàn)槲艺趯W(xué)習(xí)用簡單的英語表達(dá)自己。in English為固定搭配，意為“用英語表達(dá)”。故把with改為in。

考查形容詞。句意：這是一個他非常喜歡的有趣的故事。分析句子可知，此句中的代詞one代指上文中的“story”為物，故應(yīng)用修飾物的形容詞interesting來修飾。故把interested 改為interesting。

考查代詞。句意：他把它讀給全班同學(xué)聽。分析句子可知，此句是一個由which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，且which在從句中充當(dāng)liked的賓語，故it是多余的。故去掉it。

考查形容詞。句意：大家都說這個故事聽起來很棒。分析句子可知，sound為感官動詞，意為“聽起來”，其后常接形容詞。故把wonderfully改為wonderful。

考查冠詞。句意：這是一次多么愉快的經(jīng)歷啊！分析句子可知，此處是一個由what引導(dǎo)的感嘆句，experience在此處意為“經(jīng)歷”，為可數(shù)名詞；分析句意可知，此處表示“這是一次多么愉快的經(jīng)歷�。�”。故在what和pleasant之間加a。

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