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【題目】假如你是李華，得知你校的校報(bào)在高一新生中招聘英語(yǔ)小記者的消息，于是你寫了一篇應(yīng)聘信，用英語(yǔ)介紹自己，內(nèi)容如下：

1．現(xiàn)年16歲，高一（1）班，任班長(zhǎng)。

2．愛(ài)好英語(yǔ)閱讀，訂閱了各種英文報(bào)紙。

3．能與外賓自由交談，曾在初中舉辦的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)比賽中獲一等獎(jiǎng)。

4．自己能勝任這項(xiàng)工作，如能錄用，一定努力工作。

要求：（1）詞數(shù)：100 (文章開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不記入詞數(shù))。

（2）訂閱subscribe 英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)比賽Oral English Competition

Dear editor,

Recently I have learnt that you need little reporters from the new students in Grade 1. I’d like to be one. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

Recently I have learnt that you need little reporters from the new students in Grade 1. I’d like to be one. Now I’d like to introduce myself to you.

My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen years old. I’m monitor of Class 1, Grade 1. It is six years since I began to learn English. I enjoy reading English articles, and have subscribed all kinds of English newspapers, which I devote all my spare time to reading. What’s more, I can talk with foreign friends in English. I’m pleased to tell you that I have won the first prize in the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school, which encourage me a lot. I’m sure I will be fit for the job. I’ll do my best if I am accepted.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本文為求職信。求職信是一種書信文體，求職信一般有以下幾部分：

1、寫好開(kāi)頭。首先簡(jiǎn)明扼要說(shuō)明你是在何家媒體看到應(yīng)聘廣告以及所要應(yīng)聘職位的名稱，并寫明你對(duì)招聘單位有興趣并想應(yīng)聘他們空缺的職位。

2、自我介紹并證明自己的能力。通常在這段里介紹你的工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)及才能，特別是那些滿足所應(yīng)聘單位需要的才能。推銷要適度，不能夸大其詞。

3、結(jié)尾部分，求職者應(yīng)重申對(duì)所應(yīng)聘職位的熱情。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：本文結(jié)構(gòu)完整，要點(diǎn)齊全。句式靈活多變。簡(jiǎn)單句與復(fù)雜句（I’m pleased to tell you that I have won the first prize in the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school, which encourage me a lot）并存。既有非謂語(yǔ)中的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)（the Oral English Competition held in my junior middle school），又有各種復(fù)合句，如：固定句式中（It is +一段時(shí)間+since …）；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句如 which I devote all my spare time to reading及名詞從句（I’m sure I will be fit for the job.）和狀語(yǔ)從句（I’ll do my best if I am accepted）。此外文中還運(yùn)用了一些短語(yǔ)及連詞，增強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性，提高文章的可讀性。