Question

17．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．作文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
There are various kind of theme parks in the world．Some parks are famous for having the biggest or long roller coasters．But the theme park you are probable most familiar with is Disneyland，at which can be found throughout the world．It can bring you into the magical world．No wonder tourism is increased wherever there is a Disneyland．Other theme park is Dollywood．Its main attraction is it's culture．You can see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．If you want experience the ancient days and great deeds of English knights and ladies，princes and queens，you can go to Camelot Park．And there you can learn what people in ancient England ran their farms and took care of their animals．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹各種形式的主題公園．最著名的要數(shù)世界各地可以看到的迪斯尼樂園．另一個是Dollywood．你還可以在世界上最大的禿鷹保護區(qū)看美麗的禿鷹，也可以去Camelot Park了解古英國人是如何經(jīng)營農(nóng)場和照看動物的．

解答 There are various kind of theme parks in the world．Some parks are famous for having the biggest or long roller coasters．But the theme park you are probable most familiar with is Disneyland，at which can be found throughout the world．It can bring you into the magical world．No wonder tourism is increased wherever there is a Disneyland．Other theme park is Dollywood．Its main attraction isit's culture．You can see beautiful bald eagles in the world's largest bald eagle preserve．If you want∧experience the ancient days and great deeds of English knights and ladies，princes and queens，you can go to Camelot Park．And there you can learn what people in ancient England ran their farms and took care of their animals．
詳解：
1．kind改為kinds 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．kind是可數(shù)名詞，其前有various修飾時用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
2．long改為longest 考查形容詞最高級．or是選擇連詞，它前后連接兩個相同的語法成分，biggest和longest都是形容詞最高級作定語．
3．去掉But 考查連詞．在英語中，兩個分句要用連詞連接，在已經(jīng)有which連接句子的情況下，but是多余的，要去掉．
4．probable改為probably 考查副詞．修飾句子要用副詞形式．
5．去掉at 考查介詞．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個定語從句，先行詞Disneyland在從句中作主語，其前不需要介詞at．
6．increased改為increasing 考查動詞時態(tài)．tourism與increase之間是主謂關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在進行時態(tài)．
7．Other改為Another 考查形容詞．根據(jù)句意：另一個主題公園是Dollywood．a(chǎn)nother意為"（人，事物）又一個的，再一個的"，other意為"其他的；別的"．
8．it's改為its 考查句子結(jié)構(gòu)．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，句中已有動詞is，culture是名詞，其前用形容詞性物主代詞作定語．
9．加to 考查動詞不定式．want后接動詞時用動詞不定式形式．
10．what改為how 考查連詞．learn后接的賓語從句缺少方式狀語，用how引導(dǎo)賓語從句．

點評 高考短文改錯題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強的實用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學生的實際，從表面上看類似一篇學生習作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時把一些容易的錯誤先改好，再進行逐句改錯．其次，要進行逐個句子的改錯．這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．