Question

【題目】假設你是李華，于2017年3月25日搭乘國外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回國后，發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一個行李箱（suitcase）。現(xiàn)請用英文給該航空公司寫一封信，請他們幫你尋找。

新建要點包括：

1.陳述寫信原因；

2.簡要描述該行李

3.說明其重要性

4.期待回復并表示感謝。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信件格式已為你給出。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Li Hua,and I took your flight on March 25,2017.I was quite satisfied with your service,but when I arrived at the destination,I found my suitcase lost .So I am writing the letter hoping to get your help to find my suitcase.My suitcase is a big black one with a long handle.It is very important to me,because both my ID card and passport are in it.In addition,it also contains some confidential documents of my company.Once they are lost,it will cause damage to my company.I will appreciate it very much if you can help me oout with this situation.

Looking forward to your reply

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：試題為應用文中的書信寫作，試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點：一是寫信格式要準確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結尾。二是要詳略得當，本文應重點寫的是對箱子的描述。三要注意適當?shù)卦黾蛹毠?jié)，恰當?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運用。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇書信，文章格式正確，要點齊全，寫作層次清晰，緊扣要點框架并適當添加細節(jié)，行文連貫，句式多變，能夠正確運用各種復合句，對箱子的描述恰當?shù)皿w。I was quite satisfied with your service,but when I arrived at the destination,I found my suitcase lost .句中包含轉(zhuǎn)折連詞but，when引導的時間狀語從句和省略that的定語從句；It is very important to me,because both my ID card and passport are in it.because引導原因狀語從句；Once they are lost,it will cause damage to my company.once引導條件狀語從句；I will appreciate it very much if you can help me oout with this situation.含if條件句的固定句式用在句中；另外，In addition,的運用顯得格外耀眼。