Question

8．假如你是李華，你校將在寒假舉辦外國人學漢語的短期學習班，并為學員安排周末"北京一日游"活動．作為志愿者，請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，向他們介紹旅游活動安排，并對他們的出行提出建議．講稿的開頭已為你寫好．
One-day Tour in Beijing
Places to visit：
Price：
Transport：
Lunch：
Time to start：
Time to return：
the Forbidden City，the Temple of Heaven，the Summer Palace
$ 70
bus
traditional Chinese food
8：30 am
5：30 pm
Ladies and gentlemen．Attention，please．I'd like to introduce to you the one-day tour for the coming Saturday．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇讀寫任務(wù)作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，以"北京一日游"活動為主題，寫一篇演講稿，闡述有關(guān)旅行活動安排及出行建議．
寫作時，應(yīng)以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時，寫作要點：1．介紹旅行活動安排；2．提出出行建議．
重點短語：
famous scenic spots （名勝古跡）pick up（接送） end up（結(jié)束）have a good time （玩的愉快）
高分句型：
1．This one-day tour will cover some famous scenic spots such as the Forbidden City，the Temple of Heaven and the Summer Palace．該句靈活運用cover，famous scenic spots等詞匯，短語．
2．I strongly advise you to take enough batteries with you because there are so many things that you can record in your camera．該句提出建議，運用advise，record in等詞匯及短語．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen．Attention，please．I'd like to introduce to you the one-day tour for the coming Saturday．
This one-day tour will cover some famous scenic spots such as the Forbidden City，the Temple of Heaven and the Summer Palace．（高分句型1）All are among the dream places you want to visit．The total fee for the tour is only $ 70．
We'll leave at 8：30 in the morning．Our school bus will pick you up．About 12：30，we'll have lunch at a local restaurant for Chinese dishes，including Beijing Roast Duck．We'll end up the day at 5：30 in the afternoon．（介紹活動安排）
I strongly advise you to take enough batteries with you because there are so many things that you can record in your camera．（高分句型2）I'm sure everybody will have a good time．（提出出行建議）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所給要點，寫作時注意正確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞，句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．