Question

【題目】短文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處錯(cuò)誤。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞的下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處,多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last week our school hold a sports meeting. Realize it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it a unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much to our excitements, our performance was a success. My classmates participated various events such as running, the high jump and the long jump. Due to the hard training the athletes had done before, and their performance was very impressive. Finally the result came which our class won the second place! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proud. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.

Answer 1

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【解析】1.根據(jù)Last week可知，句子用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，故把hold---held。

2.因?yàn)橹虚g是逗號(hào)，后半句是一個(gè)完整的句子，所以前半句不可能是祈使句，也不可能是從句，應(yīng)該是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。后半句主語(yǔ)we和Realize是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，是現(xiàn)在分詞做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故把Realize--- Realizing。

3.句意：意識(shí)到這是我們最后一次學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，我們決定把它變成一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。Unforgettable以元音音素開(kāi)頭，故把a改為an。

4.句意：我們首次參加開(kāi)幕式，我們班已經(jīng)為它做了很多準(zhǔn)備工作。根據(jù)句子結(jié)構(gòu)可以看出句子不是并列句，此處the opening ceremony做先行詞，指物，后面是for+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，因?yàn)橄刃性~指物，又在介詞后面，故把whom---which。

5.固定搭配：to one’s excitement使某人興奮的是，excitement是抽象名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把excitements---excitement。

6.固定搭配：participate in參加，故在participate后加in。

7. Due to the hard training the athletes had done before,是一個(gè)由due to引導(dǎo)的短語(yǔ)，而后面and their performance was very impressive.是一個(gè)完整的句子，不是并列句，故把句中and去掉。

8.句意：最后結(jié)果是我們班贏了第二名！此處是一個(gè)同位語(yǔ)從句，說(shuō)明result的具體內(nèi)容，故把which---that。

9.副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把proud--- proudly。

10.句意：隨著時(shí)間的流逝，這次運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將是我們所有人的寶貴回憶。文章通篇以第一人稱(chēng)“我”敘述，這里指我們所有人，故把them---us。