Question

綿陽擁擠的道路給人們帶來不便，引發(fā)社會廣泛熱議。是否應該擁有私家車，有人贊成，有人反對。請你以Whether or not--Owning a private car為題，用英語論述人們的觀點，并給出你自己的觀點。

字數(shù)：120詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Whether or not--Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

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Answer 1

Whether or not--Owning a private car

Nowadays, masses of cars are crowded on the roads in Mianyang City, causing great inconvenience and a heated discussion. Different ideas vary from person to person.

Some people claim that there are many advantages of owning a private car. It gives a much greater degree of comfort. For example, they are no longer forced to rely on public transport. And with a car they can go where they like and enjoy themselves by making trips to the country or seaside on the weekends.

However, others strongly object to owning private cars. They maintain that as more and more cars run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas has been given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. What’s more, in fact, private cars have contributed to a serious traffic problem.

Personally, I think private cars should be restricted rather than encouraged.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求以“Whether or not--Owning a private car”為題，就是否應該擁有私家車，用英語論述人們的觀點，并給出自己的觀點。詞數(shù)在120詞左右，開頭不計入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點，進行了適當?shù)耐卣�，并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了定語從句、狀語從句、非謂語動詞等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：賓語從句①that there are many advantages of owning a private car，②that as more and more cars run in the street...；地點狀語從句where they like；非謂語動詞polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people等，語法知識運用嫻熟，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結構方面：范文注意使用and, however, what’s more, in fact, personally等詞和短語來銜接句子和段落，使表達變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了for example, no longer, rely on, enjoy oneself, make trips to, on the weekends, object to, give off, in fact, contribute to, rather than等短語和搭配，使作文的內容變得充實。

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