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2．假設(shè)你是李華，盡管你很努力，但在最近的英語考試中又不及格，你很煩惱，父母和老師對此也有些擔(dān)心．請給你的英國筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的情況并向他求助如何學(xué)好英語．郵件要點如下：
1．向Tom傾訴你的煩惱；
2．請教他如何學(xué)好英語．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
How are you？                                        
I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．   

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給英國筆友Tom寫一封電子郵件，告訴他你的情況并向他求助如何學(xué)好英語，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：向Tom傾訴你的煩惱；請教他如何學(xué)好英語． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：英語考試不及格 fail in my English exam；做得好 do well in；感覺情緒低落以至于想退學(xué) so depressed that???want to drop out；期待??????look forward to???
I did what I could do to prepare for it．（高分句型一）句中使用what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句
Faced with such great pressure，I felt so depressed that I nearly wanted to drop out．（高分句型二）句中Faced with such great pressure屬于過去分詞作狀語
In order to help me get out of trouble as soon as possible，I turn to you and really hope that you can give me some practical advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型三）句中In order to help me get out of trouble as soon as possible屬于不定式作目的狀語

解答 Dear Tom，
      How are you？I am unhappy these days，because I failed in my English exam again．I did what I could do to prepare for it．（高分句型一）However，when the exam came，I felt extremely nervous and couldn't do well in it．As a result，my parents were a little worried about me and so was my English teacher．Faced with such great pressure，I felt so depressed that I nearly wanted to drop out．（高分句型二）In order to help me get out of trouble as soon as possible，I turn to you and really hope that you can give me some practical advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型三）
      I am looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．