Question

【題目】假定你是學生會主席李華。你校即將舉辦"我和我的祖國"英語演講比賽。請給你校外籍教師James 寫一封電子郵件，告知他演講比賽的有關(guān)內(nèi)容，并邀請他當評委。

要點包括：

1. 比賽的時間和地點；

2. 舉辦此活動的目的和意義；

3. 誠摯邀請他擔任評委。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear James,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. James,

I’m Li Hua, chairman of Student Union. I'm writing to inform you that an English speech contest will be held in the lecture hall next Friday and we would like to invite you to be one of the judges of the contest.

The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and I" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility. What’s more, inspired by the activity, students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.

We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，告知外籍教師James演講比賽的有關(guān)內(nèi)容，并邀請他當評委。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1.表明寫信目的

2.介紹比賽的相關(guān)情況

1）比賽的時間和地點。（time and place）

2）舉辦此活動的目的和意義。（purpose and meaning）

3) 誠摯邀請他擔任評委。（invitation）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

inform; would like to do; intend to do; patriotic enthusiasm; a sense of responsibility; as well as; make contributions to; appreciate; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I'm writing to inform you that...

2. The speech contest with the theme "My Motherland and I" is intended to arouse students' patriotic enthusiasm and a sense of responsibility.

3. students will be motivated to express their love for the country as well as determination to study hard and make contributions to the motherland.

4. We will greatly appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.

5. Looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改