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12．進(jìn)入高三以后，很多學(xué)校都取消了體育鍛煉．對(duì)此情況，有人贊同有人反對(duì)．關(guān)于這一話題，你們?cè)诎嗌线M(jìn)行了激烈的討論，請(qǐng)將討論情況用英語(yǔ)寫出來(lái)．
贊成的人認(rèn)為：1．浪費(fèi)時(shí)間； 2．…．
反對(duì)的人認(rèn)為：1．可以使人放松； 2．…．
你的看法：…
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Grade 3should take physical exercise．
                                                        

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息進(jìn)入高三以后，很多學(xué)校都取消了體育鍛煉．對(duì)此情況，有人贊同有人反對(duì)．關(guān)于這一話題，你們?cè)诎嗌线M(jìn)行了激烈的討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從正反觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：take exercise做鍛煉；build up our body強(qiáng)身健體；Besides另外；However然而；a waste of time浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；In addition另外；Personally就個(gè)人而言；keep fit保持健康；
Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）
They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）
In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）

解答 We recently have had a heated discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise．Some students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）Besides，it makes us completely relaxed after long-time study in classroom．
      However，the other students are against taking regular exercise．They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）
      Personally，we need to take physical exercise on a regular basis to keep fit because nothing is more important than good health．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．