Question

3．高考是全社會關(guān)注的大事，學校和家庭表現(xiàn)尤為突出．家庭成員對考生從學習到生活給予無微不至的"關(guān)懷"，結(jié)果卻給考生帶來負面影響．根據(jù)圖畫所描述的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章，并發(fā)表自己的觀點（夾敘夾議）．

注意：1、詞數(shù)120左右．
2、文章開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，       ．

Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文．
寫作主題可以為：家庭成員對高考生無微不至的"關(guān)懷"，結(jié)果卻給考生帶來負面影響
寫作要點為：1，描述圖畫內(nèi)容；2，分析弊端；3，建議．

解答 As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，the situation is getting worse and worse．From the picture，we can see that Li Ming is"studying hard"．There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do．How poor he is!At the same time，all his families are also busy working for him．
Nowadays，many parents expect too much of their sons or daughters．They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university．It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children．However，they don't realize what a great pressure they have put on their children．It is the great pressure that often gets their children very anxious．
So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children．Only in this way will their children try their best and succeed at last．

點評 考生需根據(jù)圖畫信息，揭示圖畫中的道理，根據(jù)所提供信息提煉文章的寫作主題，需了解寫作要點及寫作意圖，仔細構(gòu)思寫作結(jié)構(gòu)，平時注意積累詞匯及語法知識．