Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150左右的英語短文。 
With the development of information industry，our personal information has become more easily exposed in public.As some celebrities are worried about their telephone number，ID number and home address being put on the internet，ordinary people like us can’t escape from the doom either.
A recent report from Xinhua reveals over twenty telephone-salespeople have been caught cheating customers by revealing their private information to local community of Beijing.
The report says the salespeople would call their potential customers trying to earn their trust by correctly revealing their personal information such as their name，telephone number，home address and even previous purchases.
They would then try to persuade the customer to buy a gold cellphone by mail. If the customer became suspicious，they would use another person’s identity to prove their authenticity.
[寫作內(nèi)容]
你在某英文報(bào)刊看到這則報(bào)導(dǎo)后，準(zhǔn)備就我們學(xué)生該如何在網(wǎng)絡(luò)保護(hù)私人信息、以 “How can we keep our personal information off the Internet？”為題目寫一篇文章給該報(bào)編輯部。
[內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括]
1．以約30詞簡(jiǎn)要概括新聞內(nèi)容；                  
2．然后以約120詞談?wù)勀愕挠^點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容包括：
(1)在信息時(shí)代，想讓個(gè)人信息完全與世隔絕是不可能的，但可盡量減少；
(2)你為解決信息泄露所采取的一些措施：   
A．到有安全保障的網(wǎng)站買東西；
B．只向能確保你個(gè)人信息安全的網(wǎng)站提供個(gè)人信息；
C．其它一些你認(rèn)為有效的措施．
[寫作要求] 
1.  可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2.  作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫

Answer 1

How can we keep our personal information off the Internet?    
As is reported，more and more people are annoyed by strangers because our personal information，such as phone numbers，e-mails and so on，is exposed to the Internet.   
It’s almost impossible to keep all personal information off the Internet.  However，we can take some measures to minimize the amount of information we reveal as we travel the Internet.
First，shopping online is the ultimate in convenience，but we must make sure that the checkout page on the site is secure.  Secondly，we can only provide information to sites that promise not to share it without our permission and avoid giving permission to share our information with “selected partners”．Besides，we shouldn’t post too much information on social networking sites，message boards and chat rooms.  And chat rooms are meant for sharing.  And if we blog，we should be careful not to reveal too much about ourselves.
Obviously，the larger an online presence we have，the more information about us is  going to be online.  An online presence is not necessarily a bad thing，as it can open a whole world of opportunities.

首先文章是關(guān)于保護(hù)網(wǎng)絡(luò)隱私的問題，我們的號(hào)碼，郵箱以及很多私人信息都被暴露在網(wǎng)絡(luò)之上，需要我們多加注意這方面的問題。但是要想完全與網(wǎng)絡(luò)隔絕是不可能的，只能盡量注意保護(hù)自己的隱私。其次在措施方面，文字提示方面的要點(diǎn)都給出來了，考生只需要翻譯即可，注意條理性，要用連接詞，如First，second, besides等。同時(shí)也要使用高級(jí)的句型，倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句等讓文章更有文采。