假設(shè)你是王東，進(jìn)入高中三個(gè)月以來(lái)，你逐漸適應(yīng)了新的學(xué)習(xí)生活。你收到初中同學(xué)李蕾的郵件，信中她向你訴說(shuō)了在高中學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到的困難。請(qǐng)你寫封回信，幫助她分析存在的問(wèn)題和并給出建議，最后附上真誠(chéng)的祝福。

 

遇到的困難

解決的方法

功課多，作業(yè)難

向老師求助，改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方式

朋友少，感到孤獨(dú)

主動(dòng)結(jié)交朋友，積極參加活動(dòng)

你的感受和體會(huì)

注意: 1. 詞數(shù)100-120。

首句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)和落款。

 

 

 

 

One possible version

Dear Li Lei,

I’m glad to receive your letter. You told me that you are having trouble in life in senior high school. So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.

In your letter, you have mentioned that you have too much homework to do and it is too difficult for you. In my opinion, you may turn to your teachers and make some changes in your learning style. That way, you can not only get along well with your teachers, but also play an important role in your own study.

In terms of friendship, you said you have suffered from loneliness because you have few friends. I think it is very normal when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. It would be a good idea if you join in some school activities actively and try your best to make more friends. By doing this, you will find there are many lovely fiends around you and you will be more outgoing and easy-going.

I hope you will find my advice useful

 

Yours sincerely,

Wang Dong

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)提示寫一封回信。幫助李蕾分析存在的問(wèn)題和并給出建議，最后附上真誠(chéng)的祝福。詞數(shù)100-120。首句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)和落款。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：

本文抓住了提示語(yǔ)的重點(diǎn)，用通俗易懂的語(yǔ)言向我們闡述了對(duì)于好友遇到的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行分析以及提供建設(shè)性的意見(jiàn)。文章中運(yùn)用了許多固定短語(yǔ)，如get along well with，play an important role in, suffer from

join in，try your best to do ，turn to ，in order to 等都顯示了作者的良好積累。其次，文章中表達(dá)看法，觀點(diǎn)的詞的使用，如In my opinion，In terms of等，同時(shí)，每?jī)啥沃g都有過(guò)渡句，銜接自然，流暢。為文章增色不少。

問(wèn)題說(shuō)明： 首先，文章語(yǔ)言太過(guò)平實(shí)，會(huì)給閱卷者一種“太過(guò)一般”的感覺(jué)，文采不足，難以得高分�？梢允褂靡恍┖玫木渥�，如：強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句或一些固定句式，能使文章水平大大提高。其次，文章幾處都略顯繁復(fù)，如：So I decide to write to you in order to offer my guidance on your learning and living problems.等，直接改為From my own experience ,I’m willing to give my suggestions to you。最后，when you just have spent three months in your new school and new class. 出現(xiàn)明顯錯(cuò)誤，in 應(yīng)該為 on。

(作文)考點(diǎn)：考查書信類寫作。

 

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