【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Ram,

Thank you for your concern about the construction of Hainan International Tourism Island.

On hearing the excited news, I almost jumped with joy. There is no doubt that they will have a great effect on the development of Hainan, especially Hainan’s tourism.Which we all know, Hainan Island is so beautiful that more and more people at home and abroad were attracted to enjoy its wonderful scenery.

Instead, more jobs will be offered to local people and they will lead a more better life. The government will also focus on the construction of transport, making it conveniently for people to travel around. The environmental protections is another concern. I am sure we will make Hainan Island ideal place for tourism. Ram, welcome to our hometown to experiencing our unique scenery and culture.

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1.excited→exciting 2.they→it 3. Which→As 4.were→are

5.Instead→Besides /Meanwhile 6. 去掉more或more→much

7.conveniently→convenient 8.protections→protection

9. ideal 前加an

10. experiencing→experience

【解析】

本文是應(yīng)用文，給朋友Ram的一封信，告知他關(guān)于作者家鄉(xiāng)的海南國際旅游島的建設(shè)的情況。

1.考查形容詞。excited意為“（人）感到興奮的，感到激動的”，修飾人；exciting意為“（某事）令人興奮的，令人激動的”，修飾事/物；此處是修飾news，指物，意為“令人激動的消息”，故excited改為exciting。

2.考查代詞。此處they應(yīng)該指代上一句提到的the construction of Hainan International Tourism Island，construction是不可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)用it指代。故they改為it。

3.考查定語從句。固定短語as we all know“眾所周知”；as引導(dǎo)定語從句，意為“正如，就像”可置于句首，而which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句一般不置于句首。故Which改為As。

4.考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上一句Hainan Island is so beautiful的時態(tài)，句子敘述的是客觀事實，應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時，故were改為are。

5.考查副詞。 上文提到“海南國際旅游島能吸引游客”，下一句提到“還能給當(dāng)?shù)厝颂峁└嗟墓ぷ鳈C(jī)會”，兩個句子之間是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系；instead意為“相反，而不是”，表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系；應(yīng)用besides意為“而且，除此之外”，表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系；也可用meanwhile意為“與此同時”，表示并列關(guān)系。故Instead改為Besides/Meanwhile。

6.考查形容詞比較等級。better是形容詞比較級，原級good是單音節(jié)詞，前面沒必要加more；也可以將more改為much，“much+比較級”意為“…得多”。故去掉more或more改為much。

7.考查形容詞。句意：政府還將專注于交通建設(shè)，使人們出行更加方便。此處為“make+ it+形容詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語” 結(jié)構(gòu)，故conveniently改為convenient。

8.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。protection是不可數(shù)名詞，不用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故protections改為protection。

9.考查冠詞。句意：我相信我們會使海南島成為旅游的理想之地。此處不定冠詞an表示數(shù)量，意為“一個”；ideal的發(fā)音是以元音音素開頭，因此用不定冠詞an。故ideal 前加an。

10.考查非謂語動詞。句意：歡迎到我們的家鄉(xiāng)來體驗我們獨特的風(fēng)景和文化。此處動詞不定式做目的狀語，后接動詞原形。故experiencing改為experience。

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