Question

5．下面這幅漫畫反映了目前家庭教育的一個側(cè)面，請以Proper Family Education為題，用英語寫一篇短文．根據(jù)漫畫內(nèi)容，結(jié)合目前的素質(zhì)教育和新的人才觀，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?br />注意：1．詞數(shù)：120-150；
      2．參考詞匯：素質(zhì)教育quality education；人才觀view of talent
 
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Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．根據(jù)對圖片的理解及英語提示寫一篇短文．首先描述圖片點明主題，分析其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．基本時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱以第三人稱為主．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
亮點部分
Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）本句有定語從句，holding屬于現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語
Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）本句含有what引導的主語從句
Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）本句有only+狀語引起半倒裝

解答 Proper Family Education
     Here is a cartoon，in which there is a boy standing between his parents，holding an exam paper in his hand．（高分句型一）He gets only 40 points．His father says angrily，"You can only become a worker in the future depending on your quality．"And his mother says，"Even become a peasant，I think．"What's your idea after seeing this cartoon？I disagree with his parents．
     First，in terms of quality education，their words are totally wrong．Because low points in exams doesn't mean poor qualities at all．Besides，what they say and do will have a bad effect on their child's development of all-around qualites．（高分句型二）Second，in terms of view of talent，good workers and peasants are talents as well as so-called white-collar．They are just different categories of work．Who dare say we don't need skilled workers or peasants in our daily life？
     All in all，proper family education is urgently needed．Only with it can we become qualified parents or children!（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．