Question

【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華，今年18歲，想利用暑期打工，你在英文報紙上看到了咖啡廳的招聘廣告。請根據(jù)下面的廣告寫一封求職信。

TEMPORARY JOB OFFER

Age 18-24

To work in busy center café.

Must enjoy working with people.

Previous experience necessary.

Good pay.

Tel. 01 222 643

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)；

3. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

Dear Sir,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear sir,

I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper. I am an eighteen-year-old student studying at Senior High school.

As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life. I’m available during the week so I have enough time for the work.

I once worked as a waiter for three months in a fast-food restaurant in my spare time, so I’m sure the working experience will qualify me for the position.

I’m outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers. Besides, I can play the piano and it can surely build up a warmer and more friendly atmosphere. I would be available for an interview at any time and I look forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封求職信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封求職信；假設(shè)你今年18歲，想利用暑期打工，你在英文報紙上看到了咖啡廳的招聘廣告，根據(jù)招聘廣告寫一封求職信。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，人稱使用第一人稱。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：apply for （申請），the position of a part-time waiter（兼職服務(wù)員的崗位），an eighteen-year-old student（一名18歲的學生），summer vocation（暑假），social experience（社會經(jīng)驗），enrich my life（豐富我的生活）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮點說明】

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級表達方式，如定語從句I would like to apply for the position of a part-time waiter, as was advertised in the newspaper.，I’m outgoing, friendly as well as helpful, which I think will help me a lot in dealing with different customers.；時間狀語從句As the summer vocation is coming, I hope to get a job to help me to gain some social experience and enrich my life.全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。