Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Mr. Smith想要了解中國(guó)春節(jié)，請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇介紹中國(guó)春節(jié)的短文。內(nèi)容包括:

1. 春節(jié)的時(shí)間;

2. 慶祝春節(jié)的方式;

3. 春節(jié)的習(xí)俗。

注意:

1. 詞數(shù)100左右

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

In your letter, you asked me about the Chinese Spring Festival. Now I’d like to tell you something about it.

The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar New Year, which is usually in late January or February. There is a name for each year, such as the dog, the monkey, the tiger or one of the twelve animals, and this year is the year of the dog.

Before the Spring Festival, the Chinese people usually give their houses a good cleaning and on the eve of the Spring Festival, all the members of a family will get together, eating dumplings, fish and meat and parents may give children some lucky money in red paper. On the first day of the New Year, there are dragon dances and carnivals. People usually go to visit their relatives and friends, which is a good way to express their best wishes to the coming year.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】首先審題，這篇文章要求假如你是李華，你的外國(guó)朋友Mr. Smith想要了解中國(guó)春節(jié)，請(qǐng)用英文寫一篇介紹中國(guó)春節(jié)的短文。首先選用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，介紹文化習(xí)俗用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三人稱來(lái)寫。然后寫出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來(lái)說(shuō)，寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如：such as例如，get together團(tuán)聚。還使用了定語(yǔ)從句The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar New Year, which is usually in late January or February.和定語(yǔ)從句People usually go to visit their relatives and friends, which is a good way to express their best wishes to the coming year.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。