Question

【題目】Children in kindergarten are learning social skills. For this reason, it’s important to tell the children what will make them become good citizens when they grow up. It’s up to parents, teachers and all others involved with a kid to teach these skills.

Teaching kids to pick up things by themselves is a good way to teach them not to throw things on the ground. For example, if a class has to make paper cutouts (剪下的圖樣), after cutting, have the children pick up the wastepaper and place it in the wastebasket.

The golden rule of good citizenship should be taught at this age. The rule is “One should treat others as one would like others to treat oneself”. Teachers should ask their students how they want to be treated. There are many answers, such as not being treated in bad manners. The teacher should explain that others don’t like to be scared, so you should not scare others either.

Following the laws is good citizenship. Proper games can be played in the classroom. Games have rules, and all students in the class should follow the rules of the games. If a child doesn’t want to follow, it is up to the teacher to explain them to the child. Teaching children about following rules should help them understand the need to obey the law when they become adults.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1． 以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；

2． 不少城市在創(chuàng)建文明城市。請(qǐng)以約120個(gè)詞談我們?nèi)绾纬蔀槲拿魇忻瘛?/span>

內(nèi)容包括：

（1） 你認(rèn)為文明市民 (a civilized citizen) 應(yīng)具備什么素質(zhì)，列舉兩三種文明行為；

（2） 作為中學(xué)生，談?wù)勀銘?yīng)如何從小事做起，為創(chuàng)建文明城市作貢獻(xiàn)。

【寫作要求】

1．可以使用實(shí)例來支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

1.The writer illustrates that it is important to teach children some skills of becoming good citizens. Therefore, he suggests teaching children to pick up things by themselves, to respect others and follow the laws.

2.As far as I am concerned, a civilized citizen is supposed to respect others. In public places, such as restaurants, stations or hospitals, a civilized citizen would not speak or talk loudly. Besides, a civilized citizen ought to be always ready to reach out their helping hands. Last but not the least, a civilized citizen should be aware of the significance of obeying the law.

As a senior high school student, I will do what I can to become a civilized citizen in my daily life. For example, I will pick up rubbish on the ground and put it into the dustbin. On my way to school, I will follow the traffic rules. All in all, I will do what I am expected to do. Only in this way can we make our hometown a more comfortable place for all of us to live in.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，1.以約30個(gè)詞概括這篇短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)2.根據(jù)材料中提示并結(jié)合事例談談我們?nèi)绾纬蔀槲拿魇忻瘛?/span>短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱。要求寫約120個(gè)詞，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】 文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語和句式。如：illustrate 、As far as I am concerned, 、is supposed to 、Last but not the least,、what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句、Only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句等都很不錯(cuò)。