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6．假設(shè)你是李明，最近收到朋友張華的電子郵件，他提到高考考生將必須參加體育測試，測試成績作為高校錄取依據(jù)．由于他平時很少參加體育活動，有點擔(dān)心體育成績會影響到高考．請你根據(jù)以下要點給張華寫一封電子郵件：
1．表明自己對體育測試進高考的看法；
2．安慰張華；
3．提出至少兩條應(yīng)對高考體育測試的建議．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；
3．書寫須清晰、工整．
Dear Zhang Hua，
I have received your e-mail telling me that sports test will be included in the college entrance examination （CEE）．I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）This will help us realize the importance of physical exercises and keep healthy．
Don't worry about this test．Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二）First，you should insist on having PE classes．Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）In addition，make the best of the break to go out of class and relax yourself．And be sure to have sports for one hour a day．
I believe you can make it!
Yours sincerely，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李明，最近收到朋友張華的電子郵件，他提到高考考生將必須參加體育測試，測試成績作為高校錄取依據(jù)．由于他平時很少參加體育活動，有點擔(dān)心體育成績會影響到高考．請你根據(jù)以下要點給張華寫一封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：表明自己對體育測試進高考的看法；安慰張華；提出至少兩條應(yīng)對高考體育測試的建議．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：worry about 擔(dān)心；take exercises做運動；insist on 堅持；join in參加；In addition另外；make the best of充分利用；make it成功；
 I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）
Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二）
Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Zhang Hua，
      I have received your e-mail telling me that sports test will be included in the college entrance examination （CEE）． I think it is necessary and important to have sports test．（高分句型一）This will help us realize the importance of physical exercises and keep healthy．
      Don't worry about this test．Although you seldom take exercises，you will improve your physical condition and pass the test if you take the following suggestions：（高分句型二） First，you should insist on having PE classes．Second，you should join in more after-class activities such as playing basketball or running．（高分句型三）In addition，make the best of the break to go out of class and relax yourself．And be sure to have sports for one hour a day．
      I believe you can make it!
                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                     Li Ming

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．