Question

14．假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會(huì)主席．即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請(qǐng)外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮．
1．時(shí)間：6月6日  上午9：00； 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂廳；
2．介紹畢業(yè)典禮的活動(dòng)；
3．希望Jeff能夠發(fā)表簡短的演講．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)80左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Jeff，
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9：00 am，on June 6^th．It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）Moreover，videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality．Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）
Please reply at your earliest convenience．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，校學(xué)生會(huì)主席．即將高中畢業(yè)，你代表全體高三學(xué)生邀請(qǐng)外教Jeff來參加畢業(yè)典禮．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：時(shí)間：6月6日  上午9：00； 地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校音樂廳；介紹畢業(yè)典禮的活動(dòng)；希望Jeff能夠發(fā)表簡短的演講． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：rang from…to…從…到…；Moreover而且；attend our graduation ceremony參加畢業(yè)典禮；
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）
Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jeff，
       I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students'Union，writing to invite you to attend our graduation ceremony．（高分句型一）
       The ceremony is to be held in the school Music Hall at 9：00 am，on June 6^th．It will start with the School Anthem（校歌），which is followed by various performances ranging from dances to martial arts．（高分句型二）Moreover，videos made by students themselves will bring the vivid recollections of past school life into visual reality．Should our graduation ceremony by ended with your speech，it would do us a great honor．（高分句型三）
       Please reply at your earliest convenience．                                                             
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．