Question

假設(shè)你是李越。你校和澳大利亞的Forest中學(xué)是姊妹學(xué)校。最近Forest中學(xué)網(wǎng)站邀請(qǐng)你推薦一位你校的環(huán)保大使(Environmental Protection Ambassador)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語(yǔ)給該網(wǎng)站寫(xiě)一封100—120個(gè)詞的Email。內(nèi)容包括：

基本情況	Lily, 女，18歲，就讀于高三（1）班
興趣愛(ài)好	愛(ài)好體育，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，上網(wǎng)
性格志向	開(kāi)朗活潑，熱心公益事業(yè)
社團(tuán)任職	校學(xué)生會(huì)主席
推薦理由	… …

注意：Email的抬頭、落款及第一句已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。
參考詞匯: 公益事業(yè) public service
editor,
I would like to recommend one of my classmates as Environmental Protection Ambassador.     
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Yours faithfully,
Li Yue

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I would like to recommend one of my classmates as Environmental Protection Ambassador. Her name is Lily and she is now 18, studying in Class 1, Grade 3.
Apart from sports, she likes listening to music and surfing the Internet. As the leader of our school’s Students’ Union, Lily is so active and open-minded that she often devotes herself to public service. All the time she is trying to call on all the people to protect the environment and not to use plastic bags at school and out of school. Last year, she took part in the national competition on environment protection, in which she got the gold prize.
I think what she has been doing is worth praising and following. I’ll be very happy if you could accept my recommendation.
Yours faithfully,

試題分析：這是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，寫(xiě)一封電子郵件。文章的要點(diǎn)基本上都給了出來(lái)，考生只需要翻譯清楚即可，難度不大。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候也不能逐字逐句的翻譯，要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，形成一個(gè)整體。選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。寫(xiě)作中注意應(yīng)用一些比較經(jīng)典的句式短語(yǔ)等來(lái)提高作文的文采，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。為了使表達(dá)更有邏輯性，適當(dāng)使用序數(shù)詞，連接詞等。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：此類(lèi)作為首先要做的就是認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不能跑題偏題。寫(xiě)作中注意一些基礎(chǔ)的寫(xiě)作常識(shí)，不犯低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤。只要平時(shí)積累足夠，就一定能獲得滿意的分?jǐn)?shù)。另外為了應(yīng)付考試，可以有選擇的背誦一些范文，這樣應(yīng)考時(shí)就會(huì)有法可依。