Question

10．假設(shè)你是高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，你校網(wǎng)站刊登了一則"走進(jìn)英國家庭"活動的通知．
你想?yún)⒓釉摶顒樱�請用英語給該活動負(fù)責(zé)人張老師發(fā)一封電子郵件申請參加．
    內(nèi)容主要包括：
    1．你參加該活動的目的；
    2．你的興趣、特長；
    3．你希望走進(jìn)什么樣的家庭．
    注意：1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
    2．詞數(shù)100左右．短文開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr Zhang，
    I am Li Hua，a student from Class l，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity because
                                                           
    Looking forward to your early replay．
    Yours sincerely
    Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
  If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．如果我很幸運(yùn)的擁有了這次機(jī)會，我希望我能住在一個(gè)對我友好并且樂意帶我到附近熟悉地方的家庭．
句型二：
I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．如果您能幫我實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想，我將非常感激．
句型一family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．該句是一個(gè)由that引導(dǎo)的定語從句，that在句中充當(dāng)主語，替代前面出現(xiàn)的先行詞family
句型二 I would appreciate it if you could help…該句的重點(diǎn)是使用了it 位于appreciate后，充當(dāng)形式賓語，真正的賓語由if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句充當(dāng)．

解答 Dear Mr Zhang，
   I'm Li Hua，a student from Class 1，Senior 3．I am longing to join in this activity because I think it a good opportunity for me to improve my English and I can also learn more about British history and its culture．
   I have many hobbies，for example，Iike surfing the internet and doing sports．My favorite sport is basketball and I often play it on weekends．Besides，I am good at drawing and I like listening to music．（自我介紹）
   If I am lucky enough to have the chance，I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often．（高分句型一）I am sure I can get along well with my host family．I would appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream．（高分句型二）（提出感謝）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours Sincerely
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路．考生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意結(jié)合主題，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文闡述清楚．