Question

1．自行車是公認(rèn)的綠色交通工具，也是我過最普通的交通工具．但隨著中國汽車擁有量的不斷增加，自行車出行受到了很大的沖擊．假如你是李華，真正參加學(xué)校舉辦的演講比賽，請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇講演稿，呼吁大家騎自行車，享受低碳生活．
內(nèi)容要點：
1．對環(huán)境的影響；2．對能源的消耗3．對健康的影響
注意
1．詞數(shù)：100字左右2．開頭已經(jīng)寫出．
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
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So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles
然而，在我看來，我們應(yīng)該鼓勵更多的人堅持騎自行車．
高分句型二：
Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．第三，騎自行車多我們的身體有好處．
句型一 in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles 該句中使用了以下重要的短語和固定搭配：in one's opinion 在某人看來   encourage sb to do sth 鼓勵某人做某事
句型二 riding bicycles does good to our health 該句的主語為現(xiàn)在分詞短語充當(dāng)，此時應(yīng)注意謂語使用單數(shù)，且該句謂語部分使用了一個固定短語：do good to 對．．有好處

解答 Good morning，ladies and gentlemen，
   With the improvement of the living standard，there has been a tendency that people begin to turn to motorcycle．
   However，in my opinion，we should encourage people to keep on riding bicycles．（高分句型一）Firstly，bicycles cause little pollution to the environment．Since a bicycle is much quieter than motorcycle，it doesn't cause noise pollution．Moreover，a bicycle never sends out harmful gas into the air．secondly，either in the process of making bicycles or using them，they consume much less energy than motorcycles．Thirdly，riding bicycles does good to our health．（高分句型二）It is an effective method available to do physical training．riding bicycles can build our body and keep us fit．（闡述理由）
   Due to the reasons mentioned above，it can be concluded that riding bicycles is really good for the individual as well as the whole society．So why not call for riding bicycles and enjoy a low-carbon life？（提出倡議）
   Thank you!

點評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點．考生在平時應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．