Question

假設你班將舉行一次英語班會，主題為“如何做一個好學生”。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文。短文中須包括以下要點：

1、嚴格自律,刻苦學習

2、尊敬師長,樂于助人

3、遵守校規(guī),不染惡習

4、不無故曠課, 不以強凌弱.

5、不斷進步,實現(xiàn)目標

注意：1 詞數(shù)：100左右。

2 內容可適當發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

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It’s important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we became good students?

Answer 1

How to be a good student

It is important and necessary for us to be good students. But how can we become good students? In my opinion, those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking, drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones. Being good students, we should show respect to our teachers and the elderly and be always ready to help others. Besides we must obey the school regulations, and try not to form the bad habits, such as being addicted to playing computer games, telling lies and teasing and bulling the weak.

In a word, good students are always trying their best to make constant progress so that they can achieve their goals.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。假設你班將舉行一次英語班會，主題為“如何做一個好學生”。請你根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇短文。短文中須包括以下要點：1、嚴格自律,刻苦學習 2、尊敬師長,樂于助人3、遵守校規(guī),不染惡習 4、不無故曠課, 不以強凌弱.

5、不斷進步,實現(xiàn)目標。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意字數(shù)，詞數(shù)100左右。

【亮點說明】 In my opinion, those who are strict with themselves and in their studies can be considered as good students while those with bad behaviors of smoking, drinking or being absent from classes without any reason are admitted to be bad ones.這里含有一個定語從句。

考點：提綱類書面表達