Question

16．爬山（mountain climbing）是一項很好的運動，修身養(yǎng)性，但涉及環(huán)保和森林防火隱患等問題．請你就爬山這項運動的優(yōu)缺點談?wù)勛约旱目捶�，寫一篇英語短文．
詞數(shù)：120字左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文為議論文寫作．人稱以第三人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．寫作要點為：爬山的優(yōu)缺點．
重點短語和句型：
offer sb a chance 給某人提供機會
benefit sth對…有好處
shape one's character 塑造人格
likely可能地
worth doing 值得做某事
高分句型：
一、…some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain，which has become a real headache for the cleaners．
本句包含while引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句．
二、Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile！
本句為only開頭的倒裝句，助動詞can放在主語we前．

解答 Nowadays there is an increasing number of people who go in for mountain climbing．Indeed，it is an awesome outdoor sport，which can offer us a chance to get close to nature．While climbing a mountain，we can enjoy beautiful views along the way and totally relax ourselves after tiring work or study．Besides，it can not only benefit our health but also shape our character．（爬山的優(yōu)點）
   However，mountain climbing is also likely to cause some negative effects．Take environmental protection for example，some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain，which has become a real headache for the cleaners．【高分句型一】What's worse，many forest fires are caused by cigarette ends which are left behind carelessly by some smokers．（爬山的缺點）
   To sum up，mountain climbing is a sport worth joining in．But when climbing a mountain，we must pay attention to the two problems mentioned above．Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile!（總結(jié)）【高分句型二】

點評 考生在寫作時需明確寫作要點，注意寫作中人稱和時態(tài)的使用，做到思路清晰，句式靈活，表達流暢．考生在平時應(yīng)多注意�？嫉淖魑男问�，積累相關(guān)的短語和詞匯．