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【題目】第24屆冬季奧林匹克運動會將于2022年2月在北京和張家口市聯(lián)合舉行�，F(xiàn)面向社會招募志愿者。假如你是李華，請根據(jù)自己的情況寫一封申請信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.熱愛體育；2.英語流利；3.性格外向開朗；有組織能力

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022. ____________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.So I am writing to apply to be one of the volunteers.

I am LiHua, an 18–year-old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time. I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game. Besides, with a very good command of English, I can speak English fluently, which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble. Meanwhile, not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.

Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position. I would be grateful if you could consider my application and offer me the opportunity at your convenience.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是提綱類寫作，要點已給出。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】本文是一篇申請信，格式正確，文章包含了所有要點，布局合理，使用高級句子。I have heard the news that you are recruiting volunteers for the Winter Olympic Games to be held in 2022.同位語從句和動詞不定式一般式的被動式完美結(jié)合；I am LiHua, an 18 –year- old boy who is built up by doing sports regularly in my spare time同位語和定語從句運用巧妙；I love sports so much that I can devote all my energies to serving the game .結(jié)果狀語從句用在句中；I can speak English fluently ,which makes it easier for me to help foreigners in trouble Meanwhile,非限制性定語從句在句中體現(xiàn)；not only do I have the ability to organize activities, but also I am outgoing and energetic which benefits me in communicating with strangers.倒裝句堪稱經(jīng)典；Everything taken into account, I think I am qualified for the position.過去分詞的獨立主格結(jié)構巧妙至極；另外，.Besides, Meanwhile, I would be grateful if---，的運用為文章增色添彩。