Question

目前高中學(xué)生出國(guó)留學(xué)(study abroad)是一個(gè)普遍的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Jim想要了解人們對(duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封信，告訴他人們的不同看法，并談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)：
1.贊同（學(xué)好英語(yǔ)、旅游、獨(dú)立……）
2.反對(duì)（溝通困難、自理能力差、孤獨(dú)……）
3.你的觀點(diǎn)……
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Jim,
I am glad that you have an interest in this phenomenon. With more and more high school students choosing
to study abroad, people’s views on the trend are divided.
                                                                              
Best regards,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am glad that you have an interest in this phenomenon. With more and more high school students choosing to study abroad, people’s views on the trend are divided.
Many students and education agencies advocate its advantages. They claim that studying abroad can not only help students learn English well, but also provide them with good opportunities to travel around the English-speaking countries and start to live an independent life.
On the other hand, many others have a negative attitude. They believe that lots of students studying abroad are actually suffering from the difficulties in communication, which in turn makes them lead a lonely life. What’s worse, some students lack the skills in looking after themselves.
Personally, I prefer students to study abroad after receiving their bachelor’s degrees at home, because it is the necessary life skills and higher English level that guarantee a successful study.
Best regards,
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常簡(jiǎn)單，學(xué)生很容易把握寫(xiě)作要求和寫(xiě)作目的。考生在寫(xiě)作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時(shí)態(tài)，要求是對(duì)高中學(xué)生出國(guó)留學(xué)(study abroad)這樣一個(gè)普遍的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單描述和發(fā)表看法，所以要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。要求讓你給你的美國(guó)朋友Jim寫(xiě)一封信，因此本文必須用第一人稱。再有就是不要根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯，應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如advocate its advantages，provide them with good opportunities，suffering from the difficulties in communication，in turn等等。還運(yùn)用了not only…but also并列句型以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：On the other hand，Personally等等。