良好的人際關(guān)系是建設(shè)和諧社會(huì)的關(guān)鍵。假設(shè)你是李華，最近你校對(duì)“中學(xué)生如何交友？”的話(huà)題展開(kāi)討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所給內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一封信給《21世紀(jì)報(bào)高中生版》“Your Words”欄目，反映討論的情況。并說(shuō)明你對(duì)如何交友看法。

為何交友

建立良好的人際關(guān)系，構(gòu)建和諧社會(huì)

交友對(duì)象

學(xué)習(xí)上的朋友

互幫互學(xué)，促進(jìn)提高，……

生活上的朋友

互助互利，擺脫困境，……

情感上的朋友

傾訴煩惱，分享喜悅，……

如何交友

（請(qǐng)考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。）

注意：

1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear editor,

Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.

As we all know,__________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

Yours ever,

Li Hua

 

Dear editor,

Recently our class have had a heated discussion on how middle school students should make friends.

As we all know, good interpersonal relationship plays an important role in building harmonious society.

Many people suggest that they should make friends who are of great benefit to their studies, so they will help each other and make greater progress with their studies. Some believe that they should have friends related to their life, whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems in terms of life, they can help rid themselves of the problems. In addition, others agree that they should have some friends who can listen to them attentively and share their bitterness and joy.

When it comes to how to make friends, in my opinion, we students should treat each other honestly. Beside, similar character and common interest will also play an important part in making friends.

Yours ever,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一封信，把“中學(xué)生如何交友？”這個(gè)話(huà)題的討論情況反映給《21世紀(jì)報(bào)高中生版》“Your Words”欄目，并說(shuō)明自己對(duì)如何交友的看法。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：交友的原因；交友對(duì)象；如何交友等三方面；詞數(shù)在150詞左右，注意開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點(diǎn)和拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀(guān)；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：

范文涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)，進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗⒆⒁庹Z(yǔ)句間的連貫性；范文還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句、定語(yǔ)從句、虛擬語(yǔ)氣等語(yǔ)法知識(shí)，具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。

語(yǔ)法方面：賓語(yǔ)從句①that they should make friends，②that they should have friends related to their life；定語(yǔ)從句①who are of great benefit to their studies，②who can listen to them attentively；讓步狀語(yǔ)從句whenever they have difficulty dealing with problems等，顯示了較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

短語(yǔ)和搭配方面：范文使用了play an important role in, rid of, bitterness and joy, when it comes to等，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實(shí)；

篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面：范文注意使用in addition, in my opinion, beside等來(lái)銜接句子和段落，使表達(dá)變得更有條理。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類(lèi)作文

 

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