Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last Sunday, my father go to see a film. But in our surprise, he came back soon. He told us about the funny thing what had happened. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. So they looked at their tickets careful, only to find the seats were the same while the color were different. After while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, ＂Sorry, I make a mistake.＂ The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Sunday, my father to see a film. But our surprise, he came back soon. He told us about the funny thing had happened. He was sitting in his seat a woman came to and said the seat was hers. So they looked at their tickets , only to find the seats were the same while the were different. After while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, ＂Sorry, I a mistake.＂ The fact was that his ticket found under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

【解析】

第一處：go→ went ＂上周日＂是過去時(shí)間，go改成went。

第二處：in→ to to our surprise＂令人驚訝的是＂，為固定搭配。in改成to。

第三處：what→ that 句意表示＂電影院發(fā)生的有趣的事情＂，這是定語從句，先行詞是thing，定語從句中缺少主語，用that引導(dǎo)定語從句。

第四處：while→ when 句意：他正坐在座位上，這時(shí)一個(gè)婦女過來了。while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，表示時(shí)間段；when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句，表示時(shí)間點(diǎn)，was doing sth. when…某人正在做某事這時(shí)……，為固定搭配。

第五處：her→ him 一個(gè)婦女朝他走過來，這里的＂他＂是指爸爸，her改成him。

第六處：careful→ carefully 他們很驚訝，所以仔細(xì)看了彼此的票。修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞carefully。

第七處：color→ colors 因?yàn)樗麄兊钠庇袃煞N顏色，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式，即color加s。

第八處：while前加a after a while＂過了一會(huì)兒＂，是固定短語。

第九處：make→ made 此處是表示爸爸之前犯了錯(cuò)誤，因此用過去時(shí)。

第十處：去掉out find＂找到＂，強(qiáng)調(diào)結(jié)果。find out＂查明，弄清＂。他的票是在桌子上的玻璃下＂被找到＂的，用found作his ticket的后置定語。