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【題目】短文改錯

A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too frightening to know what to do next. Unfortunately, a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man immediate dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at a same time. The lady called the ambulance on time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, performing first aid to the kid. A few of minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of differences. From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better preparing for an emergency.

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【答案】

A little kid fell into the lake while she was playing with her little friends. They were too to know what to do next. , a pretty lady and a man passed by and saw the drowning girl. The man dived into the water and took the girl to the bank and at same time. The lady called the ambulance time. Before the ambulance came, the lady, who proved to be a nurse, first aid to the kid. A few minutes later, the kid sent to the nearest hospital and finally saved. The story is a good example where first aid can make a lot of . From it, we know it is necessary to know basic first aid skills so that we can be better for an emergency.

【解析】

第一處：frightening→frightened 考查形容詞。根據(jù)語境，這里是修飾人，指人感到害怕，所以應(yīng)用frightened。。

第二處：Unfortunately→Fortunately 邏輯關(guān)系錯誤。根據(jù)語境，這里是說＂幸運(yùn)的是＂，所以應(yīng)用Fortunately。

第三處：immediate→immediately 考查副詞。修飾動詞應(yīng)用副詞，故用immediately。

第四處：a→the 固定搭配錯誤。at the same time ＂同時＂，故a改為the。

第五處：on→in 固定搭配錯誤。根據(jù)語境，應(yīng)該是及時叫了救護(hù)車。in time ＂及時＂，故on改為in。

第六處：performing→performed 謂語動詞的錯誤。perform 作的是主句的謂語，根據(jù)語境應(yīng)用過去時，故performing改為performed。

第七處：去掉A few 后的of 固定搭配錯誤。a few 意為＂幾個＂，修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故去掉of。

第八處：sent 前加was 語態(tài)錯誤。根據(jù)句意，這個孩子被送往最近的醫(yī)院，send與主語為被動關(guān)系，應(yīng)用被動語態(tài)，且此處為過去發(fā)生的事情，故在sent前加was。

第九處：differences→difference 名詞錯誤。make a lot of difference 意為＂有很大影響，意義重大＂。

第十處：preparing→prepared 非謂語動詞錯誤。be well prepared for ＂為……做好準(zhǔn)備＂，故preparing改為prepared。