Question

【題目】Correction 4（2016·新課標(biāo)I卷）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.

Answer 1

【答案】

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live. Though not very big, the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is . Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time. Instead, he hopes that business will grow .

【解析】

第一處：that→where�？疾橘e語從句。此處表達(dá)的是＂靠近我所居住的地方＂，故需將that改為where。where在此引導(dǎo)賓語從句，并在從句中作地點(diǎn)狀語。

第二處：but去掉。考查連詞。從屬連詞Though(雖然)不可與并列連詞but(但是)一起使用，故需去掉but。

【歸納拓展】

在英語中though、although、while或者as等引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句不和but連用；連詞because不和so連用；此外，return不和back連用。

第三處：had→have。考查時(shí)態(tài)。 整篇文章都是以現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)寫的， 所以需將一般過去時(shí)改為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第四處：honest→honesty�？疾槊�詞。根據(jù)語境＂我叔叔告訴我他成功的關(guān)鍵在于誠實(shí)＂可知，此處該用名詞形式作表語。

第五處：or→and�？疾椴⒘羞B詞。根據(jù)語境可知，此處不是表示選擇關(guān)系，而是表示＂新鮮的蔬菜和優(yōu)質(zhì)的油＂，故把or改為and。

第六處：using→used�？疾楸粍�(dòng)語態(tài)。fresh vegetables和high quality oil與use之間存在被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。

第七處：becoming前加of。考查介詞。dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意為＂夢想做某事＂。

第八處：the→a。考查冠詞。此處表示泛指，故該用不定冠詞a，in a short period of time意為＂短期內(nèi)＂。

第九處：our→his�？疾榇�詞。由語境及主語he可知，此處指的是叔叔的生意，故將our改為his才合乎語境。

第十處：steady→steadily。考查副詞。修飾動(dòng)詞grow該用副詞，所以應(yīng)用steady的副詞形式steadily。