Question

【題目】Correction 1（2017·新課標(biāo)I卷）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂Turning left!＂ I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.

Answer 1

【答案】

In the summer holiday following my birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, once I started the car, my mind blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the , ＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂ ＂ left!＂ I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes , the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a stop just in the middle the road.

【解析】

【文章大意】本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者在暑假期間考駕照第一天發(fā)生的故事。

第一處：eighteen改為eighteenth 考查數(shù)詞。句意：在我十八歲生日后的那個(gè)暑假。eighteen意思為＂十八，十八個(gè)＂，表示數(shù)量，eighteenth表示＂第十八個(gè)的＂，故將eighteen改為eighteenth。

第二處：first前加the/my 考查冠詞。句意：我依然記得第一天是多么艱難。句中特指開始學(xué)駕照的第一天，所以在first前加上the。也可以加上my，my first day表示＂我（學(xué)駕照）的第一天＂，故在first前加the或my。

第三處：so改為but/yet 考查連詞。根據(jù)句意可知作者本以為自己已經(jīng)掌握了教練的話，結(jié)果一發(fā)動(dòng)車，腦中一片空白，前后文為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故將so改為but或yet。

第四處：goes改為went 考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前文中的started可知時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，故將goes改為went。

第五處：word改為words 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：教練一直喊＂加速！＂＂減速！＂＂左轉(zhuǎn)！＂。word＂單詞，消息＂，words 可以表示為word的復(fù)數(shù)，也表示某人說的話，這里指教練說的那些話，故將word改為words。

第六處：Turning改為Turn 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。分析語境可知教練的話＂加速＂，＂減速＂，＂左轉(zhuǎn)＂都是祈使句，根據(jù)前文＂Speed up!＂ ＂Slow down!＂也可以看得出來。祈使句應(yīng)該用動(dòng)詞原形，故將Turning改為Turn。

第七處：much去掉 考查固定句型。句意：我如此緊張以至于無法分辨哪個(gè)方向是左。固定句型so...that…表示＂如此……以至于……＂，much為多余成分，故將much去掉。

第八處：late改為later 考查副詞。late在此作副詞，late＂遲地＂，later＂稍后、隨后＂。此處表示＂幾分鐘之后＂，故將late改為later。

第九處：suddenly改為sudden 考查形容詞。句意：我來了個(gè)緊急剎車。suddenly是副詞，表示＂意外地，忽然地＂。sudden為形容詞，表示＂突然的；迅速的＂，修飾名詞stop用形容詞，故將suddenly改為sudden。a sudden stop表示＂急剎車＂。

第十處：on改為of 考查介詞。分析語境可知此處表示＂在路中間急剎車＂，on the road表示＂在路上＂，the middle of the road表示＂路的中央＂，強(qiáng)調(diào)的是＂the middle＂，故將on改為of。