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4．以第一人稱(chēng)的手法按以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇題為"A Happy Trip"的短文．80詞左右，文章開(kāi)頭已給出．
1）在假期，完成作業(yè)后和好朋友John一起去爬山．
2）好朋友John又高又瘦，留短發(fā)，戴眼鏡，最喜愛(ài)旅游．
3）坐公交車(chē)去旅游，到達(dá)目的地后開(kāi)始爬山．
4）山上有美麗的花及動(dòng)物．
5）吃野餐（have a picnic）并拍照．累但玩得很開(kāi)心．
A Happy TripOn holidays，after I finished my homework，                                        

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
When we got near the West Mountain by bus，we were very exicited．當(dāng)我們乘坐公交臨近西山的時(shí)候，我們很興奮．
when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句．
【高分句型二】
Though we were very tired，we were very happy雖然我們很累，但我們很開(kāi)心．
though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 A Happy Trip
On holidays，after I finished my homework，I went to the West Mountian with my good friend named John last Sunday．（在假期，完成作業(yè)后和好朋友John一起去爬山．）John was tall and thin with short hair．He often wore glassess．His favourite is travelling．（好朋友John又高又瘦，留短發(fā)，戴眼鏡，最喜愛(ài)旅游．）When we got near the West Mountain by bus，we were very exicited．【高分句型一】We walked to the top of the West Mountain．（坐公交車(chē)去旅游，到達(dá)目的地后開(kāi)始爬山）There were many green trees and animals．（山上有美麗的花及動(dòng)物．）The air is very fresh on the mountian．At last we reached the top．We had a picnic there and took lots of photos there，too．Then we went home．Though we were very tired，we were very happy．【高分句型二】（吃野餐并拍照．累但玩得很開(kāi)心．）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文要求以第一人稱(chēng)來(lái)寫(xiě)一次去爬山的經(jīng)歷，因?yàn)榕郎桨l(fā)生在過(guò)去，所以句子的時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，要注意上下文的銜接．