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綠水青山才是金山銀山，我們的家鄉(xiāng)衢州經(jīng)過“五水共治”后，天更藍(lán)了，水更綠了，吸引了更多的外地游客來游玩。作為衢州的一員，我們該怎么做才能讓家鄉(xiāng)變得更美？請自擬題目寫一篇有關(guān)衢州環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的短文（80詞左右）。

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Answer 1

【答案】

How to be a greener person

Now, we are faced with a major problem is environmental protection, which is very important to our lives .What's the meaning of “green”?It means do something good to the earth.And how to become a “greener” person?Being a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.

First,you shouldn't throw litter about and not spit anywhere in public.Second,you'd better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a bus or a taxi if you travel a short distance.Third,you should recycle boxes,newspapers,cans and plastic bottles .Finally,you'd better use both sides of paper.What's more,you are supposed to turn off the lights when you are not using them. If you follow these suggestions,you will start turning green.But as the saying goes"Easier said done." So it's time for actions.And let's be a greener person.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文要求學(xué)生以How to Be a Greener Person 為題，寫一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表自己的看法，詞數(shù)在80詞左右。同時(shí)寫作時(shí)，還需注意語句間的銜接，使文意連貫，表達(dá)流暢。這篇短文主要告訴大家：目前我們面臨的最大的問題——環(huán)保問題。環(huán)保問題對我們來說是很重要的，那么我們應(yīng)該怎樣做才能保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，成為一個(gè)環(huán)保人員呢？

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文很不錯(cuò)。作者根據(jù)題目和要求，分析中國目前的環(huán)境問題，直接點(diǎn)題 How to become a 'greener' person?緊接著做出回答B(yǎng)eing a greener person is being friendly to the earth as well as all the human beings in the world. Try your best and we will make a difference.下一段通過First,Second,Third,Finally,What's more…具體說出應(yīng)該怎樣做才是保護(hù)環(huán)境，成為一個(gè)合格的環(huán)保人員，并倡導(dǎo)大家馬上行動(dòng)起來，共同保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境。