Question

【題目】“小手拉大手，同做文明人。”自創(chuàng)建文明城市、文明鄉(xiāng)村以來，宿遷人民萬眾一心，眾志成城，讓人點贊的行為隨處可見。作為中學生，我們也作出了自己的努力。請根據(jù)以下所給要點，寫一篇英語短文。

要點：

1.種植花草樹木；

2.遵守交通規(guī)則；

3.公共場合不大聲喧嘩；

4.公交車上主動給有需要的人讓座；

……（自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點）

參考詞匯：文明的civilized 遵守obey

注意事項：

1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名、人名等信息。

Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Suqian have made joint efforts. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, _______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Suqian have made joint efforts. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.

As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Suqian. For example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red lights. In addition, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public. What’s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.

Besides, we have formed a good habit or throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore, we are accustomed to queuing up for tickets or something else.

All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Suqian city more civilized.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹為創(chuàng)建文明城市、文明鄉(xiāng)村，我們中學生所做的努力。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：Their good behavior can……；we have also made some contributions to……，we are accustomed to……，we will try our best to do……等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。